Reviews for Fruity Love
DisturbedKittenWriter chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Aw! This is very cute _
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
Oh. My. Gosh. I don't know what to say, that's how hilarious it was! I am seriously about to laugh my head off!
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Rhyming seemed a little forced in bits, but it was nice overall. Liked the bit about her being allergic! :)
Jeremy Kerley chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Different. Everyone is intitled to be different if they so choose.
kayttea chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
now that was funny! what were their kids like sarrots? or craberries? lol. your really creative. that was very funny.
His Only chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
HAHAHAHAHAH! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO! HAHAHAHAHAH! I loved it, I loved it, I loved it! Wow! This was just so cute. I cannot stop laughing! HAHAHAHA! Gosh this was funny. I LOVED how you described the carrot. You were actually making me think he was hot! OK well not really. Excellent job. You should go pro! Send these to a magazine or somethin!
XxParalaixX chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
I love your poems, they're amazing!
FatalWhispers chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
haha that is the best! ) and thank you for the review!
tigoamy2 chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
That's funny. And clever. I never knew a blue strawberry but I'd like to meet one. LoL.

Kudos, Michelle
Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
well that started fabulously but i think yoiu were losin gyour rhytm and yur rhyme scheme towards the end. Though that could hsve just been me _ .great poem
Jisu chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
hahahahahahaha! so kawaii XD! Also reminds me of coconuts _ Also, if you have the time, would you mind looking at some of my work? I'm a Christian too so I'd love to know what you think n_n

Frosted Midnight chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
this was interesting and funny, i liked it
Leader of the Mushroom Militia chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Hey, I love the way you write D It rhymes, flows, and is humourous too Coolio! Keep it up!
white-clouds chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
Very good. I enjoyed that! A strawberry and a carrot... what an odd pair!
Anje chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
aww so cute! what would a strawberry and carrot have for a baby Oo? xD I really love this though! Keep up the humor!
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