Reviews for Online Soul Mate, Offline Enemy
Novella chapter 3 . 2/20/2013
It‘s okay so far. I like their interactions and that dream came out of nowhere, lol! I kinda wish JD elaborated on his dream though... That said, you should probably fix the “ROLF“ to “ROFL“. ;)
Proxen chapter 10 . 9/6/2008
Hey! I really like you story...

And yet, you haven't updated in forever!

Yeah, yeah, I realize, after reading the authors note, you might be barred from the computer, but I feel like I'm hooked...

Really hope you continue.
auburnfusion chapter 10 . 2/28/2008
Ha, this is one funny story that keeps me laughing all the way to the end of the page. Seriously, Ella and Jordan, classic chemistry. Can't wait to see what they'll think when they find out they've been chatting on IM for a while without realizing it.

Seriously, this is a very enjoyable story to read. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading the next chapter, whenever that may be.


found.eventually chapter 10 . 1/7/2008
you know, i read this story once, a year ago, and didn't bother submitting a review because i wasn't a member yet (the sad thing was that i didn't even know that anonymous reviews were allowed. smart, i know.) so needless to say, i forgot about this story. a year later, i stumbled upon this story again, and found myself reading through each and every chapter with much interest. damn. you're pretty good at this. can't wait for the next update. keep it up! :)
Demeterr chapter 10 . 10/14/2007
Oo wow this is interesting. Wow and you are fourteen and you wrote this.. well I'm assuming your fourteen since you said you were 13 in one of your AN about the almost car hitting you (but wow... a romance book event occurring in real life), glad you have safe though, and that you were gone for one year. Anyways look forward to the next chapter~ stay safe lol and avoid cars. Can't wait to see how this story turns out.
papermachee chapter 10 . 9/7/2007
I love this story! you must continue soon! reall, really, really, soon!

PO (peace out),

S.R.Kelley chapter 10 . 8/10/2007

i love this story i'm totally hooked!

u rock!
midnightbeauty chapter 10 . 6/2/2007
Great story. i love how jordan seems so jealous, but he's completely oblivious to it. i want him to find out the online girl is really ella! i love jordan even though he's an ass! though i suppose i seem to have a thing for complete egotistical asses ;) jordan's friends actually seem rather cool, even towards jordan's ex-friend. wah make jorda and ella get together! or make ella get with johnny and make jordan get jealous and THEN make him get with ella! oh yummy! hurry with your next update!


goodbyemylover chapter 10 . 5/30/2007
aww, really cute!

he's starting to like her!

and the gay roommate was hilarious!

update soon!

keep up the good work!
graydrizzle chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
love it! update soon please
Skeptic-Critic chapter 10 . 3/11/2007
You're back (DUDE! I thought you'd died or something) Idiot...She told us she wasn't going to have internet (well she still could've died...From lack...of...internet) Ugh...Someone save me from this nightmare...(What nightmare?) The one where I have to share the same mind as you...(You could always move out) And how do you propose I do that? (don't know. That's your problem, not mine) And the maturity level increases...(just thank your stars you managed to find betas)

I love his sister...And they make about the cutest oblivious couple ever (You would focus on something like that, wouldn't you?) What else would I focus on? (Something along the lines of the fact that you know he's going to be becoming jealous very soon...) And how do you know that? (Because it's going to happen...It has to happen...He has to get jealous...And if he beats someone up in the process [hopefully someone his own size who's making her uncomfortable. That way he 'saves' her and he's not just beating up some kid that's weaker than him so ellie doesn't think he's a monster] then it's all the better) you're just a bloodthirsty sadistic little...twerp! (Twerp? Is that the best you could come up with? And I'm not sadistic...I just like it when they fight for their love...I think that's the way to her heart) You would think that...( well...n... :P so there!) And the maturity level rises just a little bit more...Please note heavy sarcasm...
MKSub chapter 10 . 2/28/2007
i want to marry this story!

in less weird words, i really like it. haha.

updatte! :]
crampot chapter 10 . 2/22/2007
Faith Saugin chapter 10 . 2/15/2007
I like the story. And I totally know about the whole having to get good grades thing (my parents refuse to let me get a laptop until I have a straight year of A's and B' far I have mostly B's with a D in math. Who needs to know about trinomials anyways?)

Umm, so, I just wanted to say I think you have a good plot, and the whole enemies-becoming-friends-falling-in-love thing. I'm using that in my story, actually. Anyways, love it!

Au revoir! xoxoxoxo,

Essevera chapter 10 . 2/15/2007
thanks for the update
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