Reviews for Synergy
Esquirella chapter 23 . 6/21/2005
Mitchell has a lot of making up to do with Jase!
Esquirella chapter 22 . 6/21/2005
Poor Jason!
Esquirella chapter 21 . 6/21/2005
Oh no!
yeaka chapter 22 . 6/19/2005
T_T ooh, that was a mistake! mitchell, how could you? ack, poor jason... this just keeps getting worse and worse... *sighs*

but hey, what'm i complaining for? two new chapters at once! _ yay! ...and so quickly, as usual _. i'm especially glad for these particular chaps, 'cause it would've been extremely painful for two spaced out updates in a row to be about mitchell and some other girl... gr... well, at least there's kissing to come... hopefully of the mitchell-jason kind _ i'm expecting this jealousy to enlighten jason a bit. *nods*

so, yeah... awesome chap - can't wait for the next one!
Clare Greenleaf chapter 22 . 6/19/2005
Mitch was such a jerk in this chapter. I mean, really, at least they should have talked and made up. Ah, but that's just me. Besides, if Mitch hadn't acted like a jerk and took whoserface with them, there would be no plot advancement. And hm, when will Jase get to make Mitch all jealous-y because Mitch's just the cutest when he's envious. Anyway, I know that Mitch's just using her to make Jase see sense, right? Boys will be boys.

Will Jordy and Nathan Weber? Well, it could work. Knowing you, it would probably work.

Okay, right now, I want to inspire you and inspire you I shall...when I discover how to do that. Well, let's start with: wow, two chapters at once? (maybe not) and though they were shorter than the previous once, they were still really good. And poor, poor Jase. You do love torturing the poor Christian boy, do you? ::sniff:: ::brightens:: whatever! Update soon, kay?
Naomi Schemer chapter 22 . 6/19/2005
Ooh, that would be nifty! **likes those weird ass tenses** What is it with men being so incometent and unable to understand when someone is fucking inlove with them? And what's up with the whole "jealousy" thing? It might get the right emotion (not always), but it hardly ever gets the wanted result **knows from personal experience**.
Dirty-Angel-Toes chapter 22 . 6/18/2005
Oh, two chapters. Double the yumminess XD Mitchell's being a bit not-goodish (oh, look, a new word). Heh, put them in a room and lock the doors XD AND DON'T LET THEM OUT! _
Antony At Last chapter 22 . 6/18/2005
No, it isn't a bad thing. And I went back and read some earlier chapters and thought about it, he really isn't as predictable as I thought. The little bit that is only gives the story a firm grounding. This chapter, and the previous, were interesting. I like Mitchell, and Jason was always a chick, he just didn't know it.
SatisfyAnEmptyInside chapter 22 . 6/18/2005
Going that long without seeing Mitchell? He may be an idiot, but still, Jason is like...incomplete without him. The poor boy. Jealously is a shitty way to play with someone. I'd cut Mitchell's parts off if I didn't like him so much. Damn him for being loveable. Lol at them hitting the other car with the door. I always spaz and then act like I didn't do it. Heh. WELL, /SHE/ can die. Evil whore. Grr. And I'm not just saying that because she's in the way. She really does irk me.(I'll leave you to figure out which actually bothers me more. it's an easy choice.) *LOVE* I so will get to the fanfic. Really. Hope you update again SOON (but no pressure since you've given us two chapters today. You're off the hook for a while.)
SatisfyAnEmptyInside chapter 21 . 6/18/2005
Another chapter? Awesome. So I will rush to get this one done...I am so immature, man. [Especially since I was pretty sure that Will Jordy had his eyes on his teacher.] Cue seven-year-old taunts. Seriously. *hums 'jordy wants the teacher, jordy wants the teacher...' AND YES, MITCHELL IS BEING EVIL. And kind of an idiot. *sigh* Oh well. I'm sure everything will be okay (okay, so we actually know that...) Shutting up. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...
Cherise chapter 20 . 6/15/2005
Hey, hun! Whaddya mean they're..."both tiny"?
yeaka chapter 20 . 6/15/2005
Will/Nathan, you say? Hm, that ought to be interesting. _ can't wait to see that little bit unfold. a bit of cc, you used the word 'said' a lot in this chapter... *shrugs* 'nothing big or anything, that's just always bothered my in stories...

_ their water fight was uber-cute. heh. i totally thought it would lead to something, and i suppose in a way it did, but not quite the way i expected it to. i wish you had spent more time on it. that had some great potential for fluff. as it is... i'm glad their finally going somewhere. downhill, or not... at least the ideas clear in both their heads, now X) ...even if it's with the wrong impressions...

speaking of which, i can't remember if this is part of the advice from luke or if mitch's complete sincere for all of this. o_O; he just doesn't seem like the kissing and running type...

kissing... heh... i can't tell you how happy i am that that happened... X)...

yeah... so, awesomely awesome chapter, and i hope the next one resolves things! toodles.
Antony At Last chapter 20 . 6/15/2005
Interesting. The kiss approach was unique. Not random passion, but somewhat of a plan. I liked, and truthfully probably a little more realistic. Mitchell can be such a confusing character, while Jason seems to be a little predictable. I can't wait for an update, I'm sure it will be better than the last.
Dirty-Angel-Toes chapter 20 . 6/15/2005
Damn I've missed this story . Evil computer from hell. It hates me, I ! Actionyness! (I'm starting to make up words, proof that I've been hanging around my stupid friend far too long) Yum! Poor angsty confused Jason. He's so cute when he's like that.
Naomi Schemer chapter 20 . 6/15/2005 know, it would be awsome if you write a story about Nathan Weber...I mean, everyone loves storys about student teachers ...well...I do..
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