Reviews for Synergy
fbarlolken chapter 3 . 3/17/2005
For some reason, I can't shake off feeling bad for Jason.

[“What?” He was staring at my neck probably so he didn’t feel gay. “Um, actually, I changed my mind. Wet pants are better than being naked, so I’m just going to go and…yeah. It’s not even that bad anymore!”]

Mitchell is being an overbearing jerk. But a very observant jerk.

Wonder how they became friends? ::waits::

There is something very familiar in how the characters act in the story and those in real life. Nice.
Jiro chapter 3 . 3/17/2005
Great chappie! Tired. I must sleep now.
Ree chapter 3 . 3/16/2005
I love Mitchell a lot. He's just so... I don't know. So right. He's got that piece of sarcastic confidence that I find so attractive. But that's not all. He's not like... Draco Malfoy about it or anything. He's subtle, and that makes him amazing. Jason is also awesome. His normalcy is what makes him unique. (Here's hoping that normalcy is a word.) I don't know what else to say. I LOVE this story, and I hope that you update soon. 'til then, I'm off to read your LJ. :3
Naomi Schemer chapter 3 . 3/16/2005
It's most fun to write things slightly carelessly, just for the sake of them being fun to read. Personally, I don't like angst all that much, and made-for-tv movies usually don't have that, and if they do, it's badly portrayed, so I don't feel sad. And finally, Jason and Mitchelle meet. So far, I only heard their story from Sandy's point of view, so I have no clue how they met, or when they started dating, so it's fun that you wrote this, also, it tells more about Mitchelle.
SatisfyAnEmptyInside chapter 3 . 3/16/2005
The whole internet thing really sucks. I'd die without it. Lol. The chapter...of course, cuteness. Younger Jason and Mitchell are too freaking adorable. Heh. I loved the whole pants thing.

[Nowhere near his crotch, I told the perverted voice in my head. Which, for some odd reason, sounded a lot like my regular voice.]

Hehehehe. Just...*laughs*

Continue soon. Please. Love ya.
Monkeyland chapter 2 . 3/13/2005
The story sounds really good and I'm really looking forward to reading more so please update. Are they going to meet each other anytime soon?
Jiro chapter 2 . 3/10/2005
I like Jason even more now than I did before. Which brings me to the conclusion that he can do no wrong. Spit sesame seeds at his sister, and the water bufflo people _ heh. I totally love him. I want a Jason Plushie or a beanie or SOMETHING because he's just too awesome. I'm a total fanatic. I don't think there's a character on FP that I'm more obsessed wtih _ Can't wait to read more!
Naomi Schemer chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
I like coming our far more than coming of age, and there's nothing too wrong with made-for-tv movies. Well...yes there is, but I don't care, so huh! Suddenly, I like Sandy less, but she's only 11, so it's ok. There's nothing wrong with being 13, and it's not that young!**is 13**...well...boys do tend to be more immature.
a r i c a h chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
Sweetness...I really like this story so far. I think I'd really like Jason...which is really good for me to say because I usually don't connect well with characters. ANYWAY, you're getting added to my Alert List, buddy.

Keep writing and take care!~Aricah
SatisfyAnEmptyInside chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
I'm really looking forward to more too. Bleh. Sandy is an annoying little one, isn't she? I can't seem to concentrate worth shit today, so I'm going to have to read it over again later. Poor Jason. *huggles him* Continue SOON.
Ree chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
Love it. Jason is such a cute little thing, thinking he's so rebellious. I'm enjoying this story so much! Will the next chapter come out faster if I bribe you?
Dirty-Angel-Toes chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
OMG I'm signed in for once -_-; Anyway, great story so far _ It'll be good seeing how these two get together :D
myles-smiles chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
grr.i hate sandy lol.
fbarlolken chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
Yeew, it's Sandyy... Haha. J/K. I don't think Jason's mom left too-favorable an impression from 'Never'? .

['short as a hobbit']

Aww. Poor guy. ::huggles him:: Hahaha.

Jason seems to take responsibility very seriously, even as a 13 yr old...

Reading your responses to reviews:

["You're going to find so muchout about Mitchell thatyou didn't want to."]

Interesting. But Mitchell wasn't ever 'normal'. He's always came off to me as a bit of a more... ack. Can't find the word. Nothing too harsh, but not too positive. Somewhere a lot lighter than insensitive/selfcentered. So you get the drift.

But judging by the other 2 stories... they come out ok.

Anyhow. Very real; act their respective ages.

Yay for plumber's chains!
Ree chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
I love it. It warms my heart to know that I haven't lost Mitch and Jason just yet... it would have been pretty pathetic if I had to keep re-reading Never and Movie Star Kiss to get my fix. Great job, as always. I hope you update soon.
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