Reviews for LovenJealousy
MoOkiie chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
this is nice. true that love and jealousy dont mix well but when there's love, there's jealousy.
Suz4eva chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
I liked this. Diego and I are over, yeah it sucks, but I'll move on. xoxo Luck, love and light to you, -Suzy
Thyrt chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
it's hard to make someone believe that you're not lying...and as for love and jealousy, even though they aren't good to mix, they come hand in hand
Anna178 chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
I swear some people are blind, or just to assumptions to quick. This was well written and you portrayed the idea well. Keep it up, you improve alot. It's wierd, if you need proof read the first thing I posted, (a year ago) and compare to what you've read now. It's wierd, though i still suck. But this review isn't bout me, it's about you and all your greatness.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
I thought that was an interesting concept, but I think you should organize the poem into stanzas. Good start!
Qaindonunon chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
I like the rhyming. You wrote a lot of poems about you girlfriend angry at you or something?