Reviews for Poker Game
this is britt chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
the allusion is wonderful.
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
good title, good repetition, good work and blah i have nothing interesting to say. you know that you're good so keep writing.
Snowing Outside chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Wow, you are an amazing writer; it's inspiring to read all of your poetry! I guess this is just a general comment for everything, because I really can't find anything wrong with this poem. Beautifully put, and short. Nice.
beti213 chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
Hah! I love the oblique poker metaphor (I didn't read the title at first, so it was oblique for a bit there) I think you could maybe use more description, to supplement the cool phrasing... nice work