Reviews for Punishment Rations
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
A beautiful poem for its imagery. It really encapsulates the poor veiws of anorectics worldwide. 'Punishment rations' - Superb! Honestly, a lovely poem. However, I'm quite sure the fourth line should have a question mark after it, so it reads:

On punishment rations?

Just my grammar-nazi alterego rearing her ugly head.

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon [link in profile]
this is britt chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
interesting. it kind of distorted my perception for a minute. black bread and water does oddly sound pleasing right now.
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
This sounds so kissass but you are the best. This is short but hits you hard you know? just beautiful. keep writing :D