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Nev Jee chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
The rhyming was so natural and not corny, I actually didn't notice after a few lines. Nice job.

This actually changed my mood and made me feel more upbeat. The piece of very carefree and even inspiring, which is defintely refreshing to the reader.
Ivy Orion chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
That was good! Really nice job!