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| Nev Jee chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
The rhyming was so natural and not corny, I actually didn't notice after a few lines. Nice job.
This actually changed my mood and made me feel more upbeat. The piece of very carefree and even inspiring, which is defintely refreshing to the reader.
| Ivy Orion chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
That was good! Really nice job!