|Reviews for Don't Let Me Fall|
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I liked the deceptive simplicity in this. It seems like just a plea, but I can tell there's so much more behind it. I like this )
| lady of the demented hamsters chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
simple, but effective and i love the style of poetry used hear.
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
very honest and heartfelt and i know the feeling, butI must warn you to please keep God first b/c He will stand by you even when all others disappear. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
this format flows nicely. great job u made a brief, powerful statement.
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Nice! I really like. Beautiful and simple. QueenVixta
| Mlle. Daae chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
Cute. Nice work!
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Good job...with very little tweeking, you could have made it a hauku, but I like it.
| SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Short but to the point-good message.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
very powerful as well
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
very nice...i like the last line!
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
Sucks when your life depends on love doesn't? lol short and sweet and to the point. keep writing!
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
I think this is your best haiku, it is very heartfelt and honest.
Keep it up.
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Very beautiful, I like it. Well written.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Yes...I have felt this way too...it sucks when people do let you fall. Keep on going!
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Yes angsty indeed. :) I loved it though. I have aske myself this but could never put it so well in a haiku.
!~* Noelle *~!