Reviews for Only Love
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Good morning. But, without approbation and love children wilt and become stilted. Your poem captures that unconditional love that all children should have in a nurturing environment. Nicely done my friend, m.

p.s. In response to your comment about my comment about a comment,—Glad to be human and flawed, although the porcupine quills are getting old. (I know,—you thought I was bald!) [*LOL*] :-,
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
short, but so sweet! a lil suggestion though would be to play with the words, because there's something a lil off with the flow, other then that, really awesome poem - great job, hope to see more

~Sumi-chan; what you call love, i call pain.
Serene Waters chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
Sweet. Calm and sweet.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Wow. Dont know what to say except I love it

Elli
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
very well done. i applaud thee
catseyeview chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
beautiful but I don't have to tell you that...wow, all the reviews in such a short time (20) you have such a following...
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
aw... sweet~~ i likes alot!

keep writing!
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
aww, this is cute!

gr8 job! but, it is very short...i guess it has a nice effect like that!

hugsnLUBkerr
Kusje chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
really cute :)
Written chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
very beautiful and sweet. I like it.

btw, thank you for your review. as well as telling me how to make stanzas!
born-again chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
I really like it, but if it would help; maybe changing the word order in a couple of places could smooth the flow. Perhaps drop 'deep' from "in her deep blue eyes", and have "'Darling' I say" rather than "I say 'Darling". I hope I'm being constructive because I really do love all your work!
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
This isn't all that bad, ther is genuine emotion in this poem that just gets to people.
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
I actually think it's really good. It shows a lot of emotion, and it's just very strong. The poem I mean.

Yeah, I really love it.

Much love,

Rosanna.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Aw...very sweet and short. Nice job!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
aww. so sad and sweet! not your best but still makes a reader feel emotion. good job!
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