|Reviews for Only Love|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Good morning. But, without approbation and love children wilt and become stilted. Your poem captures that unconditional love that all children should have in a nurturing environment. Nicely done my friend, m.
p.s. In response to your comment about my comment about a comment,—Glad to be human and flawed, although the porcupine quills are getting old. (I know,—you thought I was bald!) [*LOL*] :-,
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
short, but so sweet! a lil suggestion though would be to play with the words, because there's something a lil off with the flow, other then that, really awesome poem - great job, hope to see more
~Sumi-chan; what you call love, i call pain.
| Serene Waters chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
Sweet. Calm and sweet.
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Wow. Dont know what to say except I love it
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
very well done. i applaud thee
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
beautiful but I don't have to tell you that...wow, all the reviews in such a short time (20) you have such a following...
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
aw... sweet~~ i likes alot!
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
aww, this is cute!
gr8 job! but, it is very short...i guess it has a nice effect like that!
| Kusje chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
really cute :)
| Written chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
very beautiful and sweet. I like it.
btw, thank you for your review. as well as telling me how to make stanzas!
| born-again chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
I really like it, but if it would help; maybe changing the word order in a couple of places could smooth the flow. Perhaps drop 'deep' from "in her deep blue eyes", and have "'Darling' I say" rather than "I say 'Darling". I hope I'm being constructive because I really do love all your work!
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
This isn't all that bad, ther is genuine emotion in this poem that just gets to people.
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
I actually think it's really good. It shows a lot of emotion, and it's just very strong. The poem I mean.
Yeah, I really love it.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Aw...very sweet and short. Nice job!
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
aww. so sad and sweet! not your best but still makes a reader feel emotion. good job!