|Reviews for Hidden|
| emilyrachel18 chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
I'M sure theres alot of ur poetry i haven't yet read or haven't seen in a long time. Babes this is perfect, it says everything so perfectly. I especially like "heavens tears run down my window pain" it's so beautifull, i think this has to be one of my favourite to date. I can so relate to this
| emily chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
The language is primitive but the content is amazing. I honestly love the content because in so many ways i can relate i think alot of people can i'm just glad you could express it
| AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
I really like your stuff, Its very powerful, sometimes the hardest part to show a person, is the part that consumes most of who you are. Good job
| blackoutroses chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
the rhyme was great- it conveyed the intense emotions well. Good work!
| Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
Why can't we let others see who we are without feelings of anxiety, guilt and regret? You expressed it so clearly, worded so well. Stay strong. all my love, shadowed mind
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
I can relate to this whole poem. We seem to have a lot of shared experiences or situations. I hope this person you talk about is very understanding about what you are going through.
Wonderfully written, you should be published, all your poems are very well written.
Keep it up.
| Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
keep it up *thumbs up* can so relate to this!
| Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
very very good! I really can relate to this! Thank you so much for reviewing so much of my work, I loved your feedback. I added you to my lists. I hope that you add me to yours.
Once again, great work and I hope to see more later.
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
Loved it. your writing is beautiful. Great, descriptive piece of work! QueenVixta x
| twistedtruths chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
that was amazing. i can relate to it soo well. seriously word for word. it was very good. great poem. one of my favs.
| forbidden passion chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
that was deep, i loved it. very decriptive and easy to relate too!
| putz-6 chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
this poem is amazing and i can really relate to it good job _
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
you shouldn't think you are a hateful person, you're definitely not! it shouldn't be like that for you, but after awhile i'm sure you'll open up...i kno it'll be hard, n i know you feel like ur lying to yourself (ive done that so many times) you just have to open your eyes, since you are you! accept yourself, then you will see you're aren't deserving to be in hell, no one is! everyone's a good person, and you have to find that in yourself...D
okay, sorry about the whole cliche lecture..i didn't mean to preach to you...i just wanted to make you feel better..
well, that was one astonishingly beautiful poem, i really liked it! as long as your able to express yourself, keep it up!
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
The first verse is great, very clever, and so is the last. The rhythm kind of goes after a few stanzas though, which to me was a bit dissapointing, the poem is good, but the same point and the same things are said a lot, but overall this is good and I can relate to this all, writing helps get feelings like this out. x weasel within x
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
I think so many people will be able to relate to this one. Or at least, I can.
It's really awesome and I know exactly where you're coming from.
Again, great job!