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Wow. That was very chilling and extremely enjoyable. It was subtly written, and had a lot of lovely imagery too.

I noticed a few mistakes, though:

"when i decided to take my night-walks" - that should be "I"

"yellow crecent blade" - it shouls be "crescent"

"The trees, looming" - I'm not sure if it needs the comma there.

However, these were only a few errors, and they didn't take away from the atmosphere of your tale.

All in all, some very nice work. two thumbs up.

Greetings once again,

Bravo! That was brilliant! That really made me shiver, I really do love a good scare every once and awhile. Again, I love your usage of words and sentences to tell the tale, such sentences as "the moon was but a cresent blade, cutting across the sky" or "The wind of the forest gave sighs of laughter" really added to the creepyness of the story. It gave me a good sense satisfaction when I reached the end of the story...the man is driven to death by the spirits of the forest...Classic. Keep up the good work.

-James Daly

whoa...whoa. that was really strange. i liked the last two lines though and it was pretty good, though i'm wondering what killed you (her). ah well. it was a good read, nevertheless. a few grammar errors int he beginning, but not enough to worry about.