Reviews for The Dance
eiyuang999 chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
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Panchromatic chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Also interesting. As your stories all seem to be
Nadja the Weird chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
Wow, what a cool story. With a little grammatical polish, I honestly think you could get this published in a magazine. Fire is indeed a fascinating thing. I just love the narrator's curiousness and frustration, he (she?) seems very real. Also, you used some great vivid langauge in this story, it was easy to see a person sitting in their den, throwing things in the fire, and turning, hoping to catch the extra shadows. I am VERY impressed. Thank you for writing this!