I love this story. My only question now is: what is Logan up to by feeding her his blood. I'm sure I'll find out by reading further. - Shelley

Hi Sarah, I love the interplay between Logan and Alana and it's a great storyline so I'm onto the next chapter to watch this story develop and their relationship grow. - Shelley

Sarah, you are to hard on yourself. Looking at the big picture, you have a most amazingly creative mind and your writing ability is still way above par. So please try not being so hard on yourself. I love watching a writer grow and that is what I am seeing here. - Shelley

Jesus, I laughed so much while reading this story! The only confusing thing was that she loved him even though he killed her parents and aunt...Hahaha but still, it was a lovely story!

I am still really unsure about this story. I know you said you were rewriting to make it more believable and all. Though your writing is still good here I for some reason just can't seem to get my head around on this one.

This is definitely different than most and I am still not sure but I do know I loved 'Blood Pet' and I was going to read the editing one of this story but there was only one chapter and I hate starting a story and falling in love with it to find out it never gets anymore. I understand you are busy so decided to try the original one out. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing of the other story so I am anxious to see how this one plays out.

Very INTERESTING thus far-definitely want to know more so on to the next chapter.

being the idiot that i am, i forgot tje password for my account but you can still PM me if you want. i absolutly loved your story! But yeah. You need to work on the first few chapters :) btw my account is under this penname

Awesome!

~loved

loved

Great Story!

Though I can't believe the main character is so stubborn and the other was so confusing to understand even to Alana... But it did make the story a whole lot interesting... :)

Good ending! I wonder how Logan killed the King, though. Guess I'm going to have to check out the rewrite to see if you explain it in there and a sequel would be cool. And I'll check out your other story, Expect the Unexpected, whenever I can. Until next time, chickie!

AH! Logan's the new King? What, did he like have a showdown with the King that pretty much made him end up the new Vampire King? Now I'm going to read the last chapter and be both sad and happy that I'm done reading this story!

YAY! SHE ADMITTED SHE LOVES HIM! FINALLY! TOOK HER LONG ENOUGH! Now what, is the only question, their love is forbidden so guess I'm going to have to read!