Reviews for Forbidden Love
Dominique Diane chapter 27 . 1/19
Jesus, I laughed so much while reading this story! The only confusing thing was that she loved him even though he killed her parents and aunt...Hahaha but still, it was a lovely story!
Alaeryel chapter 3 . 1/9/2013
I am still really unsure about this story. I know you said you were rewriting to make it more believable and all. Though your writing is still good here I for some reason just can't seem to get my head around on this one.
Alaeryel chapter 2 . 1/9/2013
This is definitely different than most and I am still not sure but I do know I loved 'Blood Pet' and I was going to read the editing one of this story but there was only one chapter and I hate starting a story and falling in love with it to find out it never gets anymore. I understand you are busy so decided to try the original one out. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing of the other story so I am anxious to see how this one plays out.
Alaeryel chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Very INTERESTING thus far-definitely want to know more so on to the next chapter.
J.J. Robisson chapter 27 . 5/23/2012
being the idiot that i am, i forgot tje password for my account but you can still PM me if you want. i absolutly loved your story! But yeah. You need to work on the first few chapters :) btw my account is under this penname
FamishedNight chapter 27 . 10/26/2011
Awesome!
Nadel chapter 27 . 2/7/2011
loved
Nadel chapter 4 . 2/6/2011
loved
lonely Angel 11 chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Great Story!

Though I can't believe the main character is so stubborn and the other was so confusing to understand even to Alana... But it did make the story a whole lot interesting... :)
Ghosts Love Me chapter 27 . 8/14/2009
Good ending! I wonder how Logan killed the King, though. Guess I'm going to have to check out the rewrite to see if you explain it in there and a sequel would be cool. And I'll check out your other story, Expect the Unexpected, whenever I can. Until next time, chickie!
Ghosts Love Me chapter 26 . 8/13/2009
AH! Logan's the new King? What, did he like have a showdown with the King that pretty much made him end up the new Vampire King? Now I'm going to read the last chapter and be both sad and happy that I'm done reading this story!
Ghosts Love Me chapter 25 . 8/13/2009
YAY! SHE ADMITTED SHE LOVES HIM! FINALLY! TOOK HER LONG ENOUGH! Now what, is the only question, their love is forbidden so guess I'm going to have to read!
Ghosts Love Me chapter 24 . 8/13/2009
God, Alana's stupid and Logan's all sad! Just admit you love him, you stupid girl and get on with the forbidden love affair stuff!
Ghosts Love Me chapter 23 . 8/13/2009
Do I need to repeat myself? I guess I do, Bryan's an ass.
Ghosts Love Me chapter 22 . 8/13/2009
Wow, Bryan's an ass. And boy is Logan stubborn! He and Alana make the perfect couple! Wonder if it was the King that caught them, guess I'm going to have to read!
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