Reviews for The Safe
Written chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
well, that was lovely! it had a charming style and just yeah. very good. I love the way they all start laughing when they realize he still has time. great work!
Devaxe The Cat-Kid chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Very good short story!

Loved it all the way!

Keep up the good work!
The Lark Ascending chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Hi!

Now that I'm done with finals and have some more time on my hands, I'm back to look through some more of your writing. This one is charming! The clock motif is haunting and sweet at the same time, much the same as the nature of the little boy. I really enjoyed it. . . and thought it very [Emily] Dickinsonian. Your style is plain and straightforward; unsentimental but poignant.

By the way, thanks for leaving me a review! It was very enlightening ;) and I look forward to further commentary if you have a moment.

Best, Palestrina
Qlmmb2086 chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Wow this story realy holds your attention from begining to end. You have a real talent for short stories.

Grammer: "but what was most strange IS that none..." should be "but what was most strange WAS that none..."
Narc chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
I really liked this. It was very original and your style of writing made it enjoyable to read.