|Reviews for Rising Star|
| this is britt chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
this actually made me sad. the whole suicide thing- really, and your last sentence to get to that person. I liked it. very fond of your writing, as always. I can hear your voice so clearly.
| Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
thats so sad but excellent nonetheless. could make a good song if worked on a bit more. keep writing.
| gold against the soul chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
This is great, I love the subtle irony and the short, potent line-breaks. This is very well-thought-out. I like it.