Reviews for Multiple Personality Syndrome
karmakaze chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
I like how you related to your friend's split-personality as two people. The only part I didn't get was when you said, "I hold you tied." I kind of thought it should be "tight" but I could be wrong.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
i really like this...very well written...the rhyming was great and the wording was superb...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
EWindheim chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
whoah. Love the back and forth contrasting deal you did with this. It has such an intresting rythum to it too. Really enjoyed this one.~Hawke
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
another wonderful poem. i like how you played with words in it. great job
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
wow.. very powerful and well done.. i like the alternating stanzas
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Such a sad poem, but so well written. this means a lot to me, thanks for sharing x weasel within x
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Wow babe.

You don't know how much this means to me. Hey it's about ** right?

It's exactly how * feel you know.

Anyway babe. Amazing poem. You actually gave me some inspiration. -_

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
Lisa Jane chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Definitely feeling the two very different personalities here. Beautiful poem.