Reviews for out of control
Perfect Reeper chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
It's Great but I hope U cited Quote the raven never more.
Chi Ame chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
I love it! I can almost see your usual humor in here too, somehow. Not a bad thing. It has a nice rythm, I love the "it's demented... tormented" lines, they gave it a nice effect.
Amora Elvenstar chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Again, interesting. I like the last line. Interesting touch.
ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
woa. has a dark aura to it. rather good though. i know about self-mutillation. it is NEVER under control, no matter what the person thinks. . .just ask my arm! lol. _ keep your chin up and your smile on.

SP
Obsidian Eyes chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
That was really good! Nice one. If you have any time please review my newest piece? Thanks. write on