Reviews for Frailty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh gosh. never knew Rhole was that dense either. o.o - even denser than Eamon? o_o XD |
![]() ![]() You should get this published or put up on Createspace or Lulu or somewhere. I'm sure that there's a large audience out there now. And I know that I would buy it and recommend it if it was a book. This is just amazing, the way you make us feel for the characters. The way you've developed the characters to be their own and not just the same kind of point of view. You're amazing at writing and wherever you are, please come back to the writing world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This... the ending just... this can't be it, can it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT SOOO MUCH! KEEP UP THE AMAZING WRITING PLEASE :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Few moments after I read the last line, I was about to bitch at you for making such an ending! At least tell us that Cole parents acknowldge Eamon and let them stay together! But then again, that's life. I actually like it, it's realistic and I can relate this to my everyday of life. But it dissappoint me though, that you didn't tell us what happen next to Bull's and the gang (specially Aki) Ah ignore me please. You're such an amazing writer and I fking LOVED your writing style! I'm going to run around the house screaming in high pitched tone like a faghag (although I'm a gay guy) Excuse me |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story although i am disappointed at the ending i was hoping to find out more if there is a sequel please pm me with the title thank you and i love the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect. I'm sorry I can't offer you a better review, but I have to go lol and to be honest, it was perfect. I had moments where I didn't like something about a character or when I wondered what the hell they were doing, or when I laughed and just overall, you did a really good job because it was so realistic. You got every character pinned. It's so hard to write so many differnet point of views, and to do it where they don't all sound the same is a great achievement :) I would love if you posted anything else! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe thinking about a sequel? I would read it with pleasure:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulation ! You finished you story ! Feel like a big acomplishment doesn't it? I was glad to read so thank you for it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering when you're going to update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why do we have to wait so long for a new chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been a long time since I read somehing where the declaration isn't followed by a kiss. It's a nice change :P Thank you for the fluffy chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, cute chapter. I love this story. More soon please. I can't believe it's almost over! :[ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I was afraid that Ken would reject him, obviously in a kind manner but still it would be rejection. He has like him for so long? How sweet, I'm glad that now they'll have each other. Thanks for updating! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() More Soon! |