aw-almost bittersweet. great work!

~tuesday

a little 'fluffy' for me...but still sweet. keep writing D

Love the reference to lilacs. Love as lilacs...intoxicating. Great job!

some that true loved,—

let their fondest wish go free,—

subtle dignity.

—freedom's happy dream,

glittering many pursue,—

rainbow glows are short.

Nice. Interesting, almost, double-meaning like.

i love it.. especially the title.. it works well with the haiku

it is very pretty. It made me cry, though.