Reviews for Why the Willow Weeps
stargazer chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
Once again, as I said on the bus, I absolutely loved it. I always loved Willows, and I now have one more reason. It's truly a blessing to know that He has a reason for all his creation. And it's for us. Wonderfully done.
nofaceme chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
This is very nice. It's sad, and sentimental. I do like the first paragraph the most. It is very pretty and symbolic. Keep it up!
rrmehta364 chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
wow, your a really good poet. i like the metaphor a lot, maybe make me think the next time i see a willow weep.
Ballerina with a Gun chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
That is so pretty. I'm not very religious (at all), but I stumbled upon this and I found the enigma surrounded this incredible. Beautiful job.
Loriency chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
*smile* I like that very much. I've actually wondered how God got the idea of a lot of thigns, and the willow tree was one of them. It's very cool, and I like the jumbled way of writing that you did, not quite completing a phrase in each line, it leaves the poem with a rocky flow, and really makes it very cool. Cya
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Absolutely beautiful. I love your sensitive descriptions. The first two verses were just gorgeous. Keep writing.
Barbados chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Everything good (as defined by me, anyway) poetry should be. Beautifully flowing, full of great imagery, and thought provoking. Masterful.
Bleeding-Gemstone chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
I really like this. Keep writing.
arwen-evenstar89 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
wOw! i haven't read any of your writing for a while... i forgot how good it is! this whole poem is awesomely descriptive, and the last two verses are really, really cool. i love it!

Broken Petals chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
This was so. . . beautiful. And deep. And other positive adjectives for poetry. Really, it was a gorgeous poem.
Young King101 chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
'Fingerlike to brush

The azure heavens'I thought that was so cool.

' A mysterious

Beauty that can give

A tremulous hope

To a saddened soul'Even cooler, I'm definitly putting this in my fav's, nice work.