Once again, as I said on the bus, I absolutely loved it. I always loved Willows, and I now have one more reason. It's truly a blessing to know that He has a reason for all his creation. And it's for us. Wonderfully done.

This is very nice. It's sad, and sentimental. I do like the first paragraph the most. It is very pretty and symbolic. Keep it up!

wow, your a really good poet. i like the metaphor a lot, maybe make me think the next time i see a willow weep.

That is so pretty. I'm not very religious (at all), but I stumbled upon this and I found the enigma surrounded this incredible. Beautiful job.

*smile* I like that very much. I've actually wondered how God got the idea of a lot of thigns, and the willow tree was one of them. It's very cool, and I like the jumbled way of writing that you did, not quite completing a phrase in each line, it leaves the poem with a rocky flow, and really makes it very cool. Cya

Absolutely beautiful. I love your sensitive descriptions. The first two verses were just gorgeous. Keep writing.

Everything good (as defined by me, anyway) poetry should be. Beautifully flowing, full of great imagery, and thought provoking. Masterful.

I really like this. Keep writing.

wOw! i haven't read any of your writing for a while... i forgot how good it is! this whole poem is awesomely descriptive, and the last two verses are really, really cool. i love it!

~Lauren~

This was so. . . beautiful. And deep. And other positive adjectives for poetry. Really, it was a gorgeous poem.

'Fingerlike to brush

The azure heavens'I thought that was so cool.

' A mysterious

Beauty that can give

A tremulous hope

To a saddened soul'Even cooler, I'm definitly putting this in my fav's, nice work.

*Underhill.