Reviews for Illusion
withprettysmiles chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
nice imagery used! i really like this one. good job on it, keep up the good work.
cracked skies chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
This is really great. Very nice imagery, and I usually do not like non-rhyming poems.
katmufla chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
hi, this was really well written and i like the general idea and flow of the poem. i don't think fluidic is a word...and the wordiness and hyperbolic terms take away from any kind of emotion...atleast for me. but there are different ways to use language...good writing!