I love that story! The last two chapters (minus the author's note) made me cry! You did a great job and if this was a real book, I believe that I would read it over and over again. Great job!

That chapter made me cry! But I'm loving this story!

Read your story. It was great though it's like a plot in a movie that I saw.

What a cute story. I love it. Thanks for posting this story up. You did a fine job!

Cute story. I think there were some kinda rough parts, like the end, that you just kind of skipped over and could have been explained more clearly and thoroughly though. I liked the songs, but sometimes the lyrics got a little redundant too. Maybe you could have focused more on Haley's emotions as well, especially towards the end, like how she felt when Chris confessed to her and why she backed away and everything. Car-Michel's character was little confusing too, because whenever he talked to Chris, he was an asshole but then whenever he talked to Haley, he was really sweet.

I don't know. I knew Kat was no good when she first came into the picture. The ending seemed a little rush. All in all though, this story was cute.

- Alyssa

I say yay! it is to good to be true, if you ask me.

Nice, entertaining, quick read! :D

Well, besides a few places where the word choice could have been better, I really enjoyed this story. Haylee and Chris had realistic interactions and it was a cute ending. Well done!

Haha. "I wasn't touching myself." Priceless.

This is cute so far! Your character interactions are excellent! I'm off to read the rest!

Aww, such a cute story, but it kinda went through fast. It still good though.

Wow, that is so sweet! I don't want it to be finish! I'm gonna cry...WAH!

Lolz. Anyway, he story is amazing! Well done!

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Great story! Love it! _

I LOVE IT!

i have always wanted to write a story like that and its great!