Oh I like the newest character, Siran. Especially her power. It's very interesting. Are there characters linked by the stones?

kudos on an engaging chapter

Great introduction of Jabari. You have a good nack for writing fantasy creatures. I like the detail of Jabari keeping features from him changes, especially the tail. It's a good image.

you actually have a good balance of plot and introduction going on. it really helps to see the relationship between Aphreal and Jabari.

This is a great chapter, especially the characterization of Aphrael. How is his name pronounced?

Great action sequence, too. I look forward to the next chapter.

Yes, this ending is much crunchier. *smiles happily* Aphrael living is unrealistic, but so much more warm fuzzy glee-ish. (If that makes sense...)

My only hope for a sequel, if there ever is one, is to see el pissed off demon action.

Livi

ah, quite satisfactory. true, id like to know more about namir, but we can't all have everything...and its good to leave some things up to the imagination. :) i'm GLAD you didn't kill aph...it would have made me sad :) grats on completion!

ahh, i fully understand now why you were so cheesed off at having lost this version, it is much better - much more satisfying. i'm glad you reposted. well written!

You do know that the ending is slightly clifhanger-ish, right? Though you DID set it up so that you can write an after story of GoN. _ Or I could, but you probably wouldn't like where I would take it...or what would happen in it. _~ *cough*Fyren/Aphreal*cough* Great Story by-the-by...though I'm pretty sure you already knew that...and so far all of your stories were good. Maybe now I'll go and try to read Smile...but no promises there. I mean, even though Gundam Wing is my fave anime, I'm not a big fan of Sci-fi..we'll see.

It does make a fitting end, but I would like to have an epilogue eventually.

Livi

Great update! I cannot wait for more your writing is amazing.

o...how ominous. Hope this ends next chapter idk if i can handle much more suspense. _

That is an evil place to leave things...but at least you update regularly.

Livi

You are an utterly cruel authoress :P Once again you've written a great chapter. The details may have seemed a bit rushed, but the writing was as good as ever.

Now, please end my misery and finish the story *not* on a cliffy or on something ambivalent. We need closure :P

I'm sorry I didn't start reading your story earlier, it means I didn't get to review more often :(

I'd just like to let you know that it's really an awesome story.

Danica

You send it to Disney World!

It's just so cute to imagine Jabari dragging Niu along...although really, it shouldn't be.

Livi

Hmm. Interesting little scene with Ducky and the creature. I wonder what she said to him. Pretty good chapter. Thanks for updating!

You think Namir wouldn't have trouble believing anything now.

Livi