Reviews for she wants to be mrs robinson
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
I'm sry but this made me laugh - the ending at least - maybe I'm just odd.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Mrs Robinson of the:

"And here's to you, Mrs. RobinsonJesus loves you more than you will know (Wo, wo, wo)God bless you please, Mrs. RobinsonHeaven holds a place for those who pray(Hey, hey, hey...hey, hey, hey)" - Simon And Garfunkel shifty song?

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I just read those lyrics, they're quite sad. Probably completely unrelated but I get sidetracked. Anyway.

Last stanza clearly the best. Second had sone strange rhythmn parts - as in it only read as two lines.. but hey. I liked it :)
addie pray chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
Fuck yeah. Bitter and I swallow willingly. Awesome work, as usual.
this is britt chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
whoa. interesting for your mom! but I liked it. a little shocking at times- but well-written, as always.
lola-in-slacks chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
i really liked this. really nice rhythm and rhyme etc, good use of words, nice underlaying sense of resentment. is she a bit of a milf then? sorry if that was offensive. xx lola