I love the style in which you wrote this poem, using a lot of one word lines built up suspense and gave it an edge. I can really relate to this, as I'm sure plenty of other writers can as well.

I LOVE IT! You're such a good poet!

Very beautiful. Just- Golly, excellent. Golly excellent. See, I'm delusional since I enjoyed it so much. :D.. Well, onto my favorites it goes!

-Lav

smthg im sure a lot of people go thought. nice poem

Beautiful! I absolutely luv the way u write. I always wonder if a certain guy ever thinks about me lately. I've got a new story that i'm really proud of if u wanna check it out sometime. Anyways, great job. Keep writing!

Beautiful!

very heartfelt, straight from the heart - no? this was great!

Awesome

Wow! I really, really liked this. Is it a very questioning poem, always wondering "if." It presents a story with interrupting details that really add emotion to it. One *tiny* thing: in Line 26, I think you meant "steal" instead of "steel."

This is definitely one of my favorite poems; Keep up the fantastic writing!

Full of questions...I wonder the same thing as you do...except my "Tommy" is a different person, of course.

I really like your writing style. Keep it up!

I really love this - very mature, affecting - I like what you're getting at. Thanks for the review - sorry i've taken so long to return it properly :/. Well done anyhow - Xia

Well I'd say enigmatic is the word to use. I like the way it has a specific story, but leaves it open for the reader to interperet (sic?). It also has a great depth to it because of this and the way you write isn't conspicuous, but it feels natural, something beyond a lot of authors. Well bye

fwah bizzare love triangle. poem was good, clear, good. :) well love is confusing huh..

beautiful...

That's lovely, it's so deep and enigmatic.