Reviews for Last Breath
Jessi chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
I once read in a book that man perhaps can take away life but do not fear, God hold's your life AND soul in his hands. It was worded differently but I liked it. This somewhat reminded me of it. Jessi
shinco chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Wow, what a grim piece! I liked it though! _ Very nice perspective of what a person thinks about before they die! I loved it! Great job! _
Nut chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
i LOVED that last line "only death lasts forever"... it had a great impact and leaves you thinking.
ThePenman chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
Dang. What did he get executed by firing squad for? Did he steal some bread or something?


Great story and detailing though!