|Reviews for For Your love|
| The Sweetest Oblivion chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
oo. i know how that feels..
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
and here i thought i'd read all Thy works
how vain of me to think i knew all
or dream of kisses from heaven's dawn
how terrible of me not to flirt
knowing full well sealed off Thy lips stay
without remorse that others suffer
o well, it's best this way monastic,
cold showers, running and exercise
plunking at music's fine symmetry
teaching somebody else's kids thoughts
they would have never by themselves seen
fortune has been so good to me dear
though i may never kiss Thy red lips
i hope Fate grant Thee all Thou wished
p.s. I know you've someone new, so it's ok to flirt now!
| Joey7691 chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
I know the feeling. So well and so much. If you read any of my poems you'll see it. He is Astro Boy and he is forbidden. Well done on the poem.
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Good poem,...I would add another line or something at the end, but its really good without it too
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
the first stanza is what i reely want (but this guy doesnt like me), but i like the rest 2. keep writing
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Hey, it's a longer one! lol. This is really good as always. I can see a similar theme to most of these.
Hope your doing okay. and as always good luck.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
This is such a sad poem. Dripping with the feelings that came from the heart, yearning for a love that may never be returned. - Beautiful job. Amazing.
!~* Noelle *~!
| xHannahx chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
this is lovely, short and to the point.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
i hate love. good poem.
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
That was really powerful, especially the last two lines. I can relate to this so much! I really love your writing, please never stop ok? _
Much love, Rosanna.
| myno chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
yeah... i relate...
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
beautiful words even in anguish
| morbidme chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
but I still hunger and thirst
for your love. wow thats strong and its similar to an analogy thats why i like it XmeX
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
aw... what a heart ache~~