|Reviews for Just Once|
| Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I liked this poem because of the longing in its tone.
I also liked it because despite being a haiku it portrayed a lot of emotion.
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| Kefrith chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Your Haikus are really good!
| LauraKM chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Good, you get alot of feeling across in very few lines, nice.
| white-clouds chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
I'm feeling that too. Awesome!
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Great poem...i dont know how many times I have told myself the same thing (the actual poem in case that isnt too clear) *sigh* but its nothing new to me!
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
my feelings exactly on paper. lol i like this cuz i can totally relate.
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Hey this is awsome. As always. Yep short, tis short but still really good.
| Ivriniel chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Aah..so beautiful! I love the "just once" at the ending, it emphasizes the speaker's wish even more.
| Alma chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Bittersweet. I love it.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
some days i feel so old and want to cry,
but after running i'm too tired for that,
when i think about youth that can't find love,
¿what's left for me, but to jump off tall cliff?
o-don't bother, i'd never make a mess,—
besides,—it's time for chocolate ice cream,
with nuts, bananas, m&m's & fudge,—
¿hell, what's love next to cool deep dish sundae?
just let me take some time to eat this now,
not have to bust my limited brain cells,
or burst some veins while blood pressure goes up,
with insoluble infernal problems,
especially,—that one that they call,—love.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
I can we all yearn for this at one time or another. That basically described pretty much every infatuation I've had.
Umm...I think you're missing a syllable in the first line. But that is if "wouldn't" counts for one syllable.
Beside all of the "technical" stuff, I enjoyed it. Keep it up!
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
... how I wish i could ... I wish I can somedat feel that emotion.
!~* Noelle *~!
| Mitsunaga chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
argh i know the feeling oh too well. My thoughts exactly.
| TiEka Koniku chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
i think we all have thoughts like that. fortunately, i have someone i can call my own. for once, i am complete. hehe. nice poem, but not all that much a haiku. needs to be complete thoughts for each line. but yeah. nice just the same. *TI*
| Macca Lane chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
nice knd fo soy but these feelings cna cna so eiasl y be ugine i knwo al about that at he ment but neve rmidn that god hakiu