Reviews for Titleless
LauraKM chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Really really good, love your work.
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
A bit brief, but very touching. Well done.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Really good poem, I like it. Heartbreaking when something like that happens. great job

hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
aww so sad. i know the feeling (not the whole thing, but some-what lol good luck with that, it made a good poem!
Marth Azumi chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Hmm, this was really good. Reminds me of an old episode of friends way back in season 2 where Rachel went to the Airport to welcome Ross home from China, but realized he brought another girl home, Julie...or something.. I forget the name XP

Anyway, yes, really good job as usual. Keep it up D

skyblue-rocks chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
...its so sad :( but nice poem.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
Just a suggestion but maybe you should take action...or hope that he doesn't find this But I hope it all turns out okay for you.

THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
I like the ideas in the verses-I would...but i know this is what will happen/happened. beautiful job.
Kusje chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
I liked this. I love ALL of your poems. :D great joB!
Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
AW! I love it! It's so sad...but the imagery is amazing. Simple imagery but very very effective...(sorry I havent reviewed a lot of your stuff until now, I'm kinda shit like that)~Beck
SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Really good EMOtion...keep writing and thx for the reviews.

mizerable-girl chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
in love, it's either you have to take the risk or live like a coward and never tell what you really feel for that person. it's a great poem. keep up the great job. :D
Armas Apple chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
AAh! This poem makes me fustrated! You should have said something... great poem! I admit, I would have kept quiet too...
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
I like this, it kinda sums up what I'd do too, I think the last 2 lines could be a bit better... it's just that the rest of the poem seems so real and then the last two lines don't really sound very... narrative... at least not to me, I think I'm just saying that 'cause I wouldn't use those words in conversation, that's the only thing I even slightly disliked about this poem. I will be sure to review more of your work when I have more time (there's a lot to get through!) thanks for your reviews, x weasel within x
xHannahx chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
(}) hugs. this is really nicely put. i like it, its goin on my faves.

21 | Page 1 2 Next »