Reviews for Jealousy
Navaura chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
Very Good. You are a really really good writer. emotional!
loves philosophy chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
WOW, so sad, why is it so sad? do you feel this? O GOD! If I felt I'd die! Good Job, painfully beautiful...~aquarius piscies~
Inherent chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
I hate how you write so good! And the different perspectives! die die die! Just kidding... Anywho this is sad... :o(
slave to the voices chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
It's suprising how you were able to convey such emotion in so few words. I'm not sure if this is a beginning of a story or what, but I liked it. Nice work, keep writing.