Reviews for Undeserving
C. N. Sweatt chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Hey Ollie, You're so sweet! This isn't a review either...though I did read your poem. Nice work! Also, I wanted to say thank you for your condolences. I really love my brother and never expected to lose him. I'll be praying for you and your brother. I hope God keeps him safe for you-no one should have to lose a person they love.

Once again, thanks a lot,Candace
Macca Lane chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
dont be so hard on the girl dreams arnt bad i lve the inteisty in this poem it could also be a good song which with alfo the rpeiat fruates in it