cool ideas, i can't wait to read the rest. I really like the idea of the collar thing, it's really clever.

By the way to the person who reveiwed your story who commented about mangas.

Mangas and Anime Rock!

Thank you for you review and, it's true that I had no idea you had an account on here. You learn something new, huh? This a whole new side to you! It's rather refreshing, though, if that makes any sense. You seem more of the serious type while I've got fluff for a brain!*giggles*

You know, I've read three of your "stories(?)" on here and they all remind me of a certain anime. This one reminds me of Ai No Kusabi. It's a 2 episode yaoi anime that has the whole collar on the slave aspect. The "Masters" are called Blondies and they take in man slaves for their own personal pleasure. A collar means you are a slave to a Blondie. The ending is rather romantic, cuz the master and slave die together.

Anyway, I've written too much. Gome! EMAIL ME SOMETIME! I've missed you!*hugs Leoanda*

Great first chapter! I am really going to make sure I keep an eye out for it in the future! You really have quite a writing talent. I can't wait to see what happens next!

By the way, can anyone please read a story I have on the site. It's called The Pocketwatch. Please read and review. Thank you very much!

Whoa! I loved it! A wonderful and unique perspective. Keep it up!

-Cerii-chan!