Reviews for Lonely Prayer
WickedSilence chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
I think the line that made this an actual poem rather than a bunch of lines stuck together was "so now I ramble on like a fool." I know that, in context, it refers to the aimlessness of the speaker's life, but placed together with the form you used in this poem, it takes on another meaning as well. Expressive and thoughtful, it is a pretty good poem overall.
infamously-anonymous chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
That last line makes it seem really deep. I was just reading it thinking it was just another poem, then I read the last line, and I was like 'Hang on, this really is GOOD and RELAVANT,' So I read it again. Very nice the way you do that, by the way. Now if you'll excuse me, this just gave me inspriation for a poem. (Oh yeah, before I forget... "Sometimes people do stupid things, not because they wish to die; But because they need to know if they are still aliveā€¦" Is that supposed to be funny? Coz it made me laugh... Anyway, I do like it. If it was in my quote dictionary, I'd highlight it)
VIKKI NEMORIE chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
Good poem. I like it.