Reviews for It
Oracular Echo chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Hm...repetition works, of course, and the end included a slight twist that helped us to understand what the poem was about. Very simple, and by no means eloquent, but somehow clever.
Suz4eva chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Interesting. Luck, love and light to you, -Suzy
Thyrt chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
ah ok..i really didn't get this until you said to replace it with something else..this is cool
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Very good points. Well written.
penname1920 chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
haha i really just want to go stomp on things now!
cowsgoquack chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
that was good..I laughed.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
very good this was well written and just good...i like it. lots of love AllyCred
this is britt chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
heh, this would make a good song to mosh too. and then at the end, it makes much sense.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
I am so impressed! This is such a creative piece! Wow, i'm so impressed! Keep up the great writing!Thank you very much for your reviews!Love Anna -xoxo-"Be honest to yourself and anything can be possible".
Armas Apple chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Wow! I really like the repetition!And also the last line that says to replace the "it" with "the awful bad habits" Man, that is so creative! I love it!
sheZadey chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
your weirdness doesnt end does it? : -p