Reviews for A Bedtime Story: The Fairytale
Nousatsu Ori za Chojutsuka chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Finish the Story Lyssa! PLease! I really wanted to read on but I wouldn't. It's the perfect beginning for a long, mystical tale. I can't wait for you to bring out more!
Solitary Secrecy chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Wonderful prologue, continue soon. ;)
Hiaburi chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Well its short, But well written. I can't really give you an idea though, as I don't have a clue as to where this is going to go.

~Hiaburi
florida chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
I liked it. The prolouge was very well written and the summery speaks for its self. But IF I were u, i'd get another chapter up, cause I need to read more!theres just one thing that I would correct, u said allright a lot of times. For an example u wrote “Allright Rae allright, but you must promise not to interrupt me allright?” I liked the first two allrights but the third one is annoying. Yep. But u have to promose to keep working on it! Please!~floridaps im adding ur story to my favorite stories list