Reviews for Forgiving
ChristianGeekGuy chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
I like this because it's a decidedly human perspective, not watered-down idealized like so much poetry is.
Serendipitous Passage chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
This is beautifully writtin. I, too, have trouble forgiving people who have hurt me before. But it's always worth a shot. The emotion you put into this is powerful and moving. You're a very accomplished writer. Well done.

Please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor.
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
I can very much relate to this! Great poem, the repetition of the fact that you tried 'this forgiveness thing' is effective. I like!
emotional-Teen chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
forgiving is hard sometimes...but forgetting is even harder. nice job.
Frosted Midnight chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
very sad very sweet , very good , i like it .
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
I love it! Full of so many emotions! Brilliantly written! Can totally relate! Well done!