Reviews for Smile
Th-forgotten chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
expressions are undenyable, and a smile can lift you up:)Way to goDorien
A. Cox chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
I love it, it is just so sweet simple and honest, I applaud
dustytiger chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
great piece, very sweet and inspriring, thank you for sharing
nine iron chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
It is the nature of our species, we have so many sub concious reactions to things, maybe that should be worked into this poem in a non obvious way, just an idea to help improve but it may need sum research. dont be afraid to research your works!

Nine Iron