It takes something for me to leave a review, but for this piece, I must.

The way you describe things are perfect.

Very sensual.

I dont see it as twisted, but thats just me.

I would love to be the individual this poem is speaking to.

Wow...Twisted, sensual..amazing.

Wow, that was really great. Good depth, detail, description. It was so vivid and very creative. You did a great job, keep it up.