Reviews for The Perfect Prince
cpd3 chapter 12 . 2/5/2006
Hey, I like your story. The last chapter had quite a few mistakes in it. I think you left out a few words and stuff like that. You may want to revise your story for comma use. I noticed a few places where they were missing. All in all, a great story!
Lady of romance world88 chapter 12 . 9/26/2005
Is this story finish? Oh my god, this is so sweet chapter. Poor Katie's mother - it's must be hard for her to accept it. Wow, they are going to have second child. How sweetly. So Brandon must loved his wife and his sweet son. Hurry update soon.
bex17 chapter 12 . 9/26/2005
Well, I had to read it before I went to bed! Good night! And you most certainly don't have to read any of my stories. But since I believe you are going to, I suggest you read 'Like to Death' by Gigi&Bexcy. My friend and I wrote it. It's about a girl and her best friend. Well, not really. One of them(my character) tries to commit suicide. But then my best friends character is for the girls out there who like romance...She has a boyfriend and it's a little innapropriate, which makes it all the more fun! lol...I'm gross and I know it...
Lady of romance world88 chapter 11 . 9/25/2005
Hey! I'm right that Katie is pregnant now. Thanks goodness, she don't going to abortion it. I gladly she choose the right choice and I know it's hard for her. Anyway, I hope she will be happy with Brandon. How dare Katie's mother kick her out. I can't believe it she won't support her. Hurry update soon.
ANS chapter 11 . 9/23/2005
Pretty good story, i like it. Update soon
bex17 chapter 9 . 9/21/2005
I don't have ideas! Just keep writing!lol...
bex17 chapter 8 . 9/21/2005
Oh my! An abortion? AH!Sorry I didn't review for the past chapters...
bex17 chapter 3 . 9/21/2005
Nice third chapter! Sorry, I got nothing to complain about...or say...Except that there are a lot of grammatical errors, but I can't complain about that either...My stories have so many errors too!
bex17 chapter 2 . 9/21/2005
Nice second chapter! Well written...
bex17 chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
THis was a great beginning too! Wow! You are very good at pulling people into the story...
PhoenixFire415 chapter 4 . 6/7/2005
This is so cool! Ah...cliff hanger I see...urgh...I hate makes me want to read the next chapter soo badly! Anyway, update soon, and Keep up the good work!
loves philosophy chapter 3 . 4/12/2005
YAY! You finnaly updated, I like this story. Good writing, kind of short, but still good. Update soon.~aquarius piscies~
Mrs. MJackson chapter 2 . 4/12/2005
HEY! i love this story, i just found it. one thing i have a problem with, WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED! it's been a month and you only have two chapters mayn! come on, now you gotta get on it! you can't be leaving us readers hangin' like this! so please update soon, i really like this story, i wonder how they're going to get together. when Brandon is gonna realize his feelings for Katie! oh my goodness i cannot wait til you update, i know this story is gonna be off the chain! update as soon as possible please

oh and feel free to mention me in one of those little respond to the reviewers thing, you know, lol. love the story, update soon
Angel-Lija chapter 3 . 4/12/2005
I hate hight school stories (they are all amatour and predictable) but this was ok. I still think it's somewhat predictable and there isn't anything that would draw me in to read when it get's updated but I'm the words most difficult reader to please so don't take that personally. Anyways, this was good.
ILuvBubbles chapter 2 . 4/10/2005
Hm...a modern day fairytale with a not so charming prince and a not so ladylike princess... that's nice. I like the way Katie thinks. Brandon isn't your everyday prince charming but a sweet bad boy? That's better than a prince charming! If Katie has a weakness for bad boys she is done for. I like the idea of the story. I also like what her mother does for a career. That is something I would have never come up with myself. Good job! Keep writing it.

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