Reviews for Paper WIngs
Inherent chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
die die die LJ die! I like this... ignore me.
Kaiwaf chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
This somehow reminds me of those Japanese/Chinese paintings with the few lines of inspiration written in kanji. However, you have some grammatical mistakes which distract from the overall. As it is so short, simple things such as that might ruin it. (Number one being the 'that' right after the first two words)