Reviews for Forever Already
UnsungbutWritten chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Rather choppy, imho.
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
I know how you feel. Well written.
Sagaciouspnay chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
M...very touching. I can definately relate to some things you touched upon inthis poem. Good job!
NewlyBorn chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
aww, dont give up on the future! but good poem...u wanna review mine now? *wink wink*
Viliqula chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
A little bit repetative but you have a good thing here. I like the feel of the poem maybe try to do a little more with the time thing, I really like it!