Reviews for Detention: A New Kind of Love Story
allsold chapter 17 . 11/13/2011
The ending was perfect x).
Fumiki chapter 17 . 9/19/2011

You love your writing style. I cried in the few chapter, specially on that chapter when Chris held Brandon and told him they should break up. I was like, WHAT THE HELL!

And I'm glad neither of them have sex with Luke and Aaron. Aaron... and Eve.. They're interesting. Eve is totally like a random character who appear out of nowhere, yet she held a very important role. So did Aaron.

This story so deserve a sequel. And you should throw Aaron and Eve in there somewhere. XD I FKING LOVE THIS STORY BUT I NEED MORE! lol
foreverandeverr chapter 17 . 6/4/2011
wow, such an amazing story I really enjoyed it! xD
Luce-Juice chapter 17 . 6/4/2011
Aww! Wow, I really didnt expect this story to turn out the way it did, but Im sure as hell glad it did? ! Loved this story :)
hellokitten16 chapter 17 . 4/18/2011
I. love. this. story.
jezza3000 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
YES ! i Found this story again... My third time reading it again...

I absolutely loved this story and thought that it was taken down, but by luck (after i had given up) I found it again in a matter of moments! :D

Thank you for this great story!
tatajelek chapter 17 . 7/12/2009
this is absolutely the story I love the most in this entire site. At the first I thought this is just another smut (and the first few chapters kinda proves it, a really good one at that too he he) but then it turned out to be the most 'real' story I've ever read. Like if I'm told to imagine like what a relationship between two gay highschool boys is, this is the one that will absolutely come up in my mind. But I'm kind dissapointed with your another story, 'Miami', not as good as this and believe it I've read the entire story bevore reviewing. All in all though, keep writing!
aripie chapter 17 . 7/10/2008
this story was really good - im surprised so little reviews came outta it - oh well heres 1 more!

thanks so much for writing it

~ari :)
Sobran chapter 17 . 5/21/2008
Thank you for the story, I really enjoyed it. Despite several spelling/grammar mistakes ( need to be carefully edited) and the abrupt introduction of various pov(s) towards the end (it was very out-of-the-blue and derailed from the established pov, especially jason's and billy's, which i thought were redundant to the story), your piece was able to conjure emotions and empathy from the reader toward the characters and actually contained good plot underneath all that porny sex, which i haven't decided if this element is good or bad, ). I'm sure your story-telling skill will mature with time. Keep on writing.
Mari chapter 17 . 8/2/2007
I'm so happy for having come across this fic even though it was written so long ago. It's just...perfect. I'm speechless. I can't stop thinking about it. Chris and Brandon are amazing characters and their relationship is so well-written, so...real. I was rooting for them until the end and you didn't disappoint. :) I just wanted to let you know I LOVE this fic.
Back of Beyond chapter 17 . 5/5/2007
Amazing story and a great ending.
Werehuntress chapter 4 . 4/5/2007
Damn i almost cryed at the end *sniff* I'm so sorry it's over :( I just don't have the words to describe that fic. It was just PERFECT!
total vintage chapter 6 . 2/25/2007
Cokii chapter 17 . 12/30/2006
wow that was great i can't believe that chris said he loved brandon. i was a bit confused how p.o.v.s jumped around a bit but as you said it works
atreyu love chapter 10 . 12/4/2006
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