|Reviews for Detention: A New Kind of Love Story|
| atreyu love chapter 3 . 12/4/2006
| atreyu love chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
| NOT YOU STORY chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
I've read this story in full somewhere else. I've also read the author's other stories all written with the same style, which your stories have not been, which kinda makes me think that you didn't write this story. and you claim that you've had it written on paper for months and typed it all at once then posted it? it was on the internet for months before you posted it on here. why do you feel the need to PLAGERIZE? do you get some sort of satisfaction from nice reviews that comment on something you NEVER ACTUALLY WROTE?
| Ki'alla chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
hey its me again. i wanted to let you know that u are an amazing writer. i stayed up last night untill 4:30 reading this story, i couldnt put it down. Please continue writing.
| roars.in.public chapter 11 . 9/1/2006
Oh, so sad...My eyes are watering. You write angst so well!
| roars.in.public chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
"What is going on in here?"Well, isn't it obvious?One can only go so far in life without being able to recognise certain things.
BTW... your writing style is dirty. dirtydirtydirty. You give a whole new element to realism. I've never read such blunt slash in my life.
~Meant to be a compliment, you know? _
| Ryu chapter 17 . 8/10/2006
That was intense. I hv read other sappy stories that proved the point that i wasted my time reading them in the first place. Let me tell you that your story was brilliant, you paid close attention to all the details of each character making them come alive n delude me into thinking that these characters were real. keep it up i know that ur're good.. the only thing is.. do u know that ur're good? (_)
| professor-studmuffin chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
My god, this fic is friggin perfect. And the sex scenes are so hot. This should double as a script for a really good porno, haha.
| Reader chapter 4 . 5/20/2006
I actually don't get the point in this story. Is the plot basically two dumb boys fucking each other, and talking dirty? I mean I have yet to see where this is going, and seeing as I just skip all the sex scenes out, because let's face it first time was fine then 3 chapters later it's the same thing over and over gets boring. I can hand it to you, that you can write some good sex scenes.
But since it's only *on* chapter 4, I'm going to read on and see if this is actually a story and not a bad porno movie.
| Mommysthumbelina chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
| jka1 chapter 17 . 3/12/2006
this was an excellent story well done maybe you could write a sequal
| ani18 chapter 17 . 3/7/2006
I read your story in one sitting. I couldn't stop reading. I must confess that I love it. Your writing is so descriptive and I imagine your characters being real people. I was so enveloped by this story. I am happy that Chris finally told Brandon how he really felt. Thank you for writing such a great story.
| NOLONGERPOSTING chapter 17 . 2/8/2006
great job with the story...I hope they stay together for forever. They deserve that much.
| Abigail Radle chapter 17 . 1/11/2006
Umm. Wow, that was such a moving and emotional story, I loved every word of it (yup yup).I can't even begin to express how refreshing it is to see a romantic story penned by a male. Because no matter how hard a female writer tries, she can never, ever replicate that same ambience, that aura that exudes from the characters, that a male writer can create. Your characters are very, very real, and so are their expressions and emotions. A lovely story. ;)
| Edwit chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Yeah! Hot gay action! Wooh! Wow... That sounds like osmehting I would write... 'cept I'd make it against a bookcase, or over a sink, or on the teacher's desk... Yeah. the weird places... They'r ethe best. But this was cool. I love the last line... "Me and Brandon just made up." Heheh... Yup. this has so much description... it's awesome.