Reviews for Everytime
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
Ah yes. We all feel like that a lot.

It's just straightforward bearing-of-the-mind type poetry.

Very nice
TrueToMyself chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
! I usually start my reviews with an adjective, but I think an exclamation point suits this better. I am completely in love with this poem; many times I have wished that I could just have some suggestion: "Then I feel bad/for having to yell/and that I didn't resolve anything;/I just made it worse." seems a bit... run-on-y. Maybe "Then, I feel bad/for having to yell;/ I didn't resolve anything-/ I just made it worse." This is definitely going on my favorites!


P.S. Thank you SO VERY MUCH for reviewing every, single one of my poems! Seeing them (with the helpful suggestions!) actually made my day. _
sweetxinsincerity chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
oh i know how you feel, this just hapened recently w/ me so i can really relate, and i agree with you!anyways great work! btw thnx for the review.