Reviews for Everytime
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
Ah yes. We all feel like that a lot.

It's just straightforward bearing-of-the-mind type poetry.

Very nice
TrueToMyself chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
! I usually start my reviews with an adjective, but I think an exclamation point suits this better. I am completely in love with this poem; many times I have wished that I could just have some suggestion: "Then I feel bad/for having to yell/and that I didn't resolve anything;/I just made it worse." seems a bit... run-on-y. Maybe "Then, I feel bad/for having to yell;/ I didn't resolve anything-/ I just made it worse." This is definitely going on my favorites!

~TrueToMyself

P.S. Thank you SO VERY MUCH for reviewing every, single one of my poems! Seeing them (with the helpful suggestions!) actually made my day. _
sweetxinsincerity chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
oh i know how you feel, this just hapened recently w/ me so i can really relate, and i agree with you!anyways great work! btw thnx for the review.