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i really, really like this. but i hasn't been updated in two years :/

This was so disturbing.

And you wrote it beautifully, I must say. You have such a nice play on words, manipulation of imagery which is really beautiful. I loved it a lot, really.

It is so stark, but in a poetic way, if you get me. Anyway. Really, this is brilliant.

Oh, this is so touching. Very well written, especially how her caring for him lead to him passing out in the kitchen, i love this, please update soon.

Wow. Umm, just, wow.

You wrote it in such a way that I can see it, I can almost even understand it.

cm

so odd.

there is a skinny boy at my education facility of the same name.

he is half a boy, so small.

dont most feeding tubes go into your throat,er, upper chestal region?

hands of a stanger.

or brother?

ticktock.

that is quite cruel but this is so intruiging

that is quite horrifying.

Wow...

I'm just in.. stunned silence, maybe even awe?

Speechless really.

Just..., wow a great job...

It makes me sad, because I'm in the same situation, and I fear this is the road I'm heading (all over again)..

It's good.. and real...

it scares me how much i can relate to everything this boy is thinking. you make this so personal, so detailed, so REAL that it's almost impossible not to. amazingamazing. please keep writing.

...Wow. That was chillingly amazing. The only suggestion I have is to combine some of the sections so that each chapter is longer. Other than that... The words, everything is just slightly *twisted*, reflecting Blaine's skewed thought processes. Excellent work. Is this the ending?