my ex is anorexic. you are giving me my nightmare. and i love you for it.

This chapter seemed more grounded in reality than the others - interesting development in the story.

Beautiful story - so original. I hope you update soon!

Lovely description.

Heartbreaking.

How can she be like that?

Well written chapter, beautiful style.

Really vivid images.

I love the little random facts running through his head.

Beautifully written story.

I can find no way to express what I want to say! I love it. All your work. I love all of it.

You really manage to express feelings well.

Beautifully distinct and original writing style.

Lovely detail. Lovely chapter.

Such a fantastic story.

Beautifully written.

Original topic.

Lovely characters.

I don't know what to say, I'm awed!

um...yea I just wanted to say you're awesome for mentioning Sylvia Plath ... okay I'm weird I know... you are an awesome writer, too. I wouldn't be here if you weren't. : )

New, unique perspective. This is definitely going onto my list of favourites.

I just read all six chapters in one go and I'm so stunned. Your writing is so matter-of-fact, so simple, and so wonderful. It always leaves you wanting to read more and more. Excellent story.

And I love your pen name. The Ultraviolent...A Clockwork Orange is awesome.

This is really interesting - I like the writing style and (as far as this non-anorexic knows) very realistic. I can't wait to read more.

chilling, gripping and spectacular. another wonderus installment, love it. "A battery of questions fired themselves at him inside the polished office, reverberating against the triangle of the Doctor, and, his mother." just delicousl imagery and painfully vivid decriptions. " the delicate veins webbed upon his eyelids vibrant against his greying skin." tender, painful and addictive- wicked story. cant wait for more, see what happens.

o.m.g. that paragraph about his "Mother" had my mouth WIDE OPEN... and I have a tragically cruel one.

when i was in crisis, she at least PRETENDED she cared, well ok at least in front of the "professionals" acted out guilt and self blame. ok ok until they disagreed with her...

but STILL my mouth was wide open and i reread the insults one by one picturing that lovely "little" boy sitting there blankly, wincing inside after probably hearing it a million times.

ya never get used to abuse. good chapter, to a great story. sad and true!

WOW!

This is definetly going on my favorites.

Oh, wow I just love this. It's so haunting and effective. I love stories from a male perspective on tricky subjects like this. Wonderful writing.