This start is wonderful. It's strong enough to be a one-off, but I'm glad it's continued.'After all, he reasoned, he was.' and 'Old habits die hard, you know.' are wonderful. They're almost a direct commentary, rather than a thought. I loved it.

Nice summary btw, simple but almost reprimanding incase you thought they couldn't/didn't.

oh, this was lovely, so perfect. it's so rare that you see such a brilliantly-written account of when a guy actually has these type of issues, these kinds of problems- kudos to you.

wow this is amazing. it has alot of voice and is well written. cant wait to read more.

its like watching someone you think understands you and wanting to hurt the people that are hurting (though they are helping) him. what a surprise, i wasn't expecting more. its lovely. i miss you. i love you. i will talk to you soon darling.

wow this is such a moving, and crazily addictive story. fantastic descriptions they wrap it all up and present such a perfect presentation of the events and feelings. "like a little boy ragdoll's." loved it.

wonderfully dreadfully wicked. the descriptions so poetic able to expose the twisted world, and every inch of pain and emotion in here. just beautiful. and thanks for the reviews, yup eating disorders another issue in their waiting to be unfurled in some other chapter or so. maybe thats why i like your work so much, tragically relatable? or just damn brilliance? probably both.

This story is really good, and sad. Update soon!

this chapter is getting me more hooked. the sheer horror is somehow comforted by the last line. and i gotta say, I too love Placebo's Every Me and Every You (as well as other Cruel Intentions tracks) ;D that is now quoted on your profile page.

HEY NOW, you're planning on updating, right? Hell, this is brilliant. Keep it up. I seriously fucking love this.

The only problem I have with it is where he thinks "you know you're thin if your forefinger and thumb meet around your wrist" or however it was stated... Mine do, and I'm not thin!

Other than that, though, gorgeous ).

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beautiful. a gorgeous, heart-shattering piece of writing. will there be more or is that the end?

reall one of the most incredible pieces ive read ina long time. each sentence is pure brilliance and some of the descriptions just amazing. Really touching, heart breaking and painfully tragic story.

christ this is so raw and so powerful and just plain...amazing. I can't believe how good this is; really the atmosphere is so perfectly portrayed to the point where im flinching when shes screamign and can feel the sadness of the silence when she leaves.

wow, purely awesomely wicked stuff. Never known a boy with anorexia, but you're right it can happen and this is such a wonderful idea. The descriptions...so good it makes me dizzy. You feel everything, the surrounding the emotions and the sad tragic fate.

The words.. the images.. well, i just now read this and not only do some of these pictures fit into my past with males, but some of the exact words i have typed recently in other places than this about "random facts moving through minds", huh?

this is one of d most unbeleivably moving disturbingly realistic stories ive ever read! its such a great thing dat sum1 has acknowledged dat this happens to guys 2! there fite really shuk me.. her words wer honest and full of pain.. and just everything in this story seems lyk its aching... uv captured d atmosphere wonderfully.. and i hope dis isnt the end... wow.. anways WELL DONE! keep up d amazing work! love and admiration Gretchen45 x plz o plz review my story 'truly madly deeply' as it means alot to me! tanx xx