this is a beautifully depressing ,why don't you?

Wow. That's all I can say. Is this over? It was really amazing and it's going on my favorites list. I loved the fast-paced, almost distorted, confusing style of writing. Keep up the awesome work! :) ~Abigail

This is very good, please continue

:)

xox

i love the way you weave together seemingly random thoughts and pictures.

this is so amazing that i'm scared.

you are absolutely you for writing this.

Wow, this is amazing. There aren't many stories on here about boy's having eating disorders, and I really admire you for writing this. Anyway, it's very good, and I like this very much. I hope you update soon.

Aha, I just noticed that this had a second chapter... submit me for the clueless award, please ;)

Again, I quite liked this. Michelle was scary, but you handled her well-the flip-out didn't seem too over-the-top. You've got a lot of talent!

"By now he was crying, hard, too, slumped under the counter, knees curled to his chest, body heaving, trembling, shuddering."you know what i think of it. i am almost crying now. because it reminds me of myself, and it reminds me of you, and it reminds of all the things we ever wanted to be, but it's so hard to find it. it's pretty ; it's painful ; it's everything we ever 's wonderful, and you know that is my honest to god thoughts on it.

Very well written, only, I mena that, and only people like me could truly understand this, because I have been there. I know how you feel.

This is a very affecting little piece-I really felt for the main character. I'm glad to find a piece that speaks about male eating disorders, since they're usually just a tiny byline in bigger pieces about female ones.

Does this piece have a follow-up, or further chapters planned? I'm really curious.