| Reviews for Secrets and Scars |
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   kat-a-tat-tat chapter 1 . 1/14/2014 I really like this story and the character of Jess is very well-written and three dimensional and the dialogue is believable :) However, some of the characters are pretty flat and Tyler especially seems a little bit too good to be true. His girlfriend (stupid, blonde, and mean) is a little bit of a cliche-if this is a ever edited, maybe give her some more believable dialogue/traits? -Kat |
| soulless librarian chapter 19 . 1/10/2014 I've read every chapter and this is a great, great story. I definitely love it. One of my new faves! |
| soulless librarian chapter 6 . 1/9/2014 "I never had o" "personalities just class" "you right that one too" are mistakes. Your a/n at the bottom of the page has mistakes too. :) As for the story, it's nice. It's escalating a bit too quickly for me, and I think our precious narrator is reading Ty and Rachel too quickly and she has no flaws, not counting trust issues and a bad home enviorment, but those don't exactly count. I still enjoyed the chapter. :) I'm never bored with your story-telling. |
| soulless librarian chapter 3 . 1/9/2014 It should be "hear ty driving away" not "here ty driving away" and very good. The "Never show weakness" parts are... odd? I don't know how to describe it, but it just seems [[insert fitting word]] to just put that in there. Maybe it's just me? |
| soulless librarian chapter 1 . 1/9/2014 A spelling mistake (IT should weakness was placed instead of "It showed weakness") I love the style. It's not too descriptive but not too everything-else, if you know what I mean. :) |
| The Undecisive Thinker chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 I'm reading through pretty much all of your stories. I adores TRS and I liked the sequel even better. Even if you did kill Colmen. I also really enjoy this story :3 Side note-yellow roses represent jealousy, not undying love. But I could be wrong :p |
| D chapter 19 . 1/16/2013 I didn't know getting charged for battery, child abuse, and all that only added 10 years... Would thought 25 yrs (Apperetnly one Canadian lifetime...-.-) I do believe we live longer than that xD |
| Mika chapter 19 . 11/14/2012 I said this before, but, I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORIES! They should make this into a movie or something! But then again, they always leave stuff out in movies... WHO CARES?! You could publish it! Keep on writing! |
| Mika chapter 4 . 11/14/2012 O.O I LOVE YOUR STORIES! I finished reading TRS and I'm reading Bright Star, so I looked at your other stories! I LOVE THEM ALL! Keep on writing! ;) |
| roseflower chapter 4 . 1/14/2011 your story is realy great |
| Ngoc1231 chapter 19 . 8/24/2010 This was a good story. A bit too emotional and crazy for me, but I still enjoyed it until the end. And I don't know how this is K but eh, I've seen worse ratings. I personally would have thought this would have been at least a T. I am happy that she is free, and it is quite sad that he is only going to be in prison for only 10 years. I enjoyed the story! ~*~Ngoc1231~*~ |
| Country Princess chapter 19 . 11/8/2009 Aww that was good! |
| queenehlana chapter 19 . 5/29/2009 AW! That was so cute! :D I hope Jessie stay together in the sequel which I must now read! Queen Ehlana |
| Night-Rayne chapter 19 . 5/6/2009 hey, I just wanted to say this was a really good story |
| rach chapter 1 . 4/20/2009 lol! loving it already! my name is rachel too... except that im not half the bitch that she is. well, i hope not! great chap |